Here's the Internet Archive listing of Cunnie Rabbit, Mr. Spider, and the Other Beef by Florence Cronise, with editorial help from Henry W. Ward, and illustrations by Gerald Sichel.
Unlike the more contemporary books I've written about in previous posts (by Grainger, Bryan, Lester, and Hamilton), this old book by Cronise is not one I would recommend for pleasure reading exactly, although it is an incredibly valuable resource, and what I want to do here is give people a sense of what a genius job Virginia Hamilton did in adapting the creole texts from this book into stories of her own. Hamilton stripped the folktale of its cloying frametale, and then used a creole style while infusing the story with her own details.
Here, for example, is where Cunning Rabbit (a chevrotain; see information here), is fighting with Spider, and Spider hoists Rabbit up into the sky. This is the version in Cronise:
Cunnie Rabbit go to de sky; he blow one horn wey he hole nah he han'. W'en he blow um dark come, w'en he blow um agin, do' clear. He fa' down, he grip de wuld, VIP!
And here is Hamilton's version:
Cunnie Rabbit, him goes up to the sky. Up there, he holds him a horn. Why so? 'Cause he can! He can-do and be-do Cunnie Rabbit. he hate it all, can-do all. He blows the horn, and the dark comes down. He blows it again, and down comes dayclean. An'en, he falls down next and takes him hold of the earth — whoomp! But Cunnie Rabbit, him, get'um back up!
Isn't that great? I love the way Hamilton both echoes the old text while doing new things and making it all fit together. I would really like to learn how to be able to do that.
Meanwhile, I am working on creating creole texts of the stories stripped of the frametale and then rendered in more conventional English; more about that project here: Editing Creole Stories for Wider Audiences.
So, the texts in Cronise are fascinating to use for comparison with Hamilton in order to get some insight into her own verbal art. Another useful feature of this book is the illustrations, which are quite nice, and which can also be compared with the Barry Moser illustrations in Hamilton's book. For example, here is Tortoies riding Leopard as depicted by Sichel in Cronise's book:
And here is Moser's version in Hamilton's book:
Comparing pictures in detail (and digital versions let you zoom in for detail) is a great way to better appreciate the distinctive features of both versions.
So, today's recommendation is a "daily double" ... BOTH Hamilton's Ring of Tricksters and Cronise's Cunnie Rabbit, just a click away at Internet Archive. :-)
No comments:
Post a Comment
Comments are limited to Google accounts. You can also email me at laurakgibbs@gmail.com or find me at Twitter, @OnlineCrsLady.